Review Detail of Storm_Water in A Scum's Only Wish
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I'M HERE!! Sorry in advance, if I make you mad. 🙇🙇 Frankly, the grammar is good but the plot progression are slow, the update stability is understandable, the world is limited and it needs more characters. The torture keeps on going but there is no other interaction? What about other slaves that died? Did they leave a revenge plan for future slaves? If other nobles are like them, why not make them fight like a sick and twisted dog fighting ring? Does the maids and butlers just there for gaze of digust. The world is limited to orphanage, mansion and dungeon. What about outside? Is there a religion in this story? Will the MC eventually get powers like the more damage he takes the body adapts therefore more heavy torture? Is it from a deity or a devil? Maybe a pet rat or something then crush it to agitate the MC to exact his revenge? I know the story is just starting, sorry. I'm just throwing suggestions. 🙇🙇 Thank you for reading my rant/review.
A Scum's Only Wish
Kirogami
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😊 relax my dude we're not gonna bite you. Try to enjoy yourself while you're at it. Go wild, my dude.
Kirogami:Thanks for this. Looking back, you're right. As for the limited plot as of right now, I'd say that I'll reveal more and more as things go on but yea I'll try to speed things up when needed.
Yea I know but I also want to create something worth reading. You've been here since the 1st chapter so I'm simply taking the constructive criticism and hopefully I'll get better as time passes.
Storm_Water:😊 relax my dude we're not gonna bite you. Try to enjoy yourself while you're at it. Go wild, my dude.
Kirogami:Yea I know but I also want to create something worth reading. You've been here since the 1st chapter so I'm simply taking the constructive criticism and hopefully I'll get better as time passes.