Review Detail of LanceG in Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
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Seriously stop writing a review that only contains "Harem" in it. It seriously made the story made like it was reviewed by a bot or the same person. Writing Quality 3/5: Too be honest, the only thing this story needs is an editor. as the story is readable even with the occasional grammar problems. Stability of Updates 3/5: I'M F*CKING HUNGRY FOR UPDATES, like seriously the amount of good original story has reached it's peak and now you can't find anymore good new ones. Story Development 4/5: LOVED IT. Seriously the protagonist isn't a beta wuss character and actually uses his IQ, Plus the cheats is op but not to the point of ridiculousness rather its growth potential is limitless and other than a few plot holes like (How did the main character find a demon beast with a god level to give to xiao ning'er) It's perfect. Character Design 3/5: The story heroine needs more background or rather more focused, not spread or a cardboard box personality one. World Background 4/5: Rated because of the overall story. Anyway, I Highly recommend you to read it.
Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
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I try to proof read my work from time to time and correct any problems I see, hopefully I can get rid of them soon. If you could point out any chapters you saw them in for me to take a closer look I would appreciate it. With updates can only say I won’t drop it so there will be updates. I will need about a month to write each volume assuming they are not too long. Like volume 3 might take longer, but if it becomes too long I will split it into two and post the finished volume. About the demon spirit for his harem. I did not mention it, maybe I should have, but the mc can use his cheat to take over the demon spirit and upgrade it, meaning being able to give it away to someone else, like Ning’er and others.