Great story, novel idea, masterful execution. The only real issue is the fact that the updates are so slow. the language issues are ignorable, and the writing quality(how the writing flows) is barely affected.(I’m pretty sure he also goes back and fixes up the chapters when he can, cause the date the chapters were updated changes) All in all, please improve update speed. That’s all I really want, love your story, look forward to more.
Ryocor
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