Over all I love this it's amazing. I probably couldn't do any better, author-sans English is a bit wobbly some times, but if there is any you have to look hard to notice it. The update is kind of slow but author-San is in school so it's a good reason why it's so slow. Besides my nitpicking it's amazing and I hope this will go over 100 or more characters. đ
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LIKEWow, thanks for the Review. If I get Feedback like that I have to be honest as well though. I currently have vacation and enough time to write, but I get sidetracked really easily, thankfully to the right stuff at the moment. I have been watching lots of Pokémon Theory Videos and other Videos that give me a better Idea of the Poké-Universe and how I want to continue. Speaking of continuing that's obviously the part that I have the most trouble with, aside from getting sidetracked, I have trouble with finding the right sentences and while I have some general Ideas I want to implement (some of them are out of the comments) I'm making the story up on the spot which holds me up more then I want. My vacation ends on the 17. of March and I hope I can at least get a chapter out every week on Sunday so that I can make that dream of a 100 chapters come true (I would love to make the story that big :D).