Review Detail of Ryocor in Reborn as a Pokemon - An Isekai Story
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Shamless 5 star Review.. bla bla blubb. You all now how authors say it. It‘s first attempt at a real story. So it‘s obvious that I won‘t be perfect. I won‘t deny that. But if it‘s really a **** 1 Star Story you‘ll have to read it first and tell my why it is. :P I actually liked writing it. So please tell my if you liked reading it so far and feel free to give me advice, correct my mistakes and give me your input on what might happen next. :)
Reborn as a Pokemon - An Isekai Story
Ryocor
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I currently habe no plan for harmem or romance. None for a Human form either, I will probably make him able to speak to humans because a few powerful Pokémon where able to do that, I‘am thinking about Lucario and some of the legendarys. So Pokemon-Human Interaction becomes possible. I do plan that he travels with a women for some time but not permanantly. In the End I plan to make him really op, don’t know yet if I will make him rule some piece of land or if people will praise and pray to him like they do to some other legendary Pokémon. I guess we will see what happens. I‘am always open for suggestions.
DragonkingKyo:is he going to get a human form? and whether get it or not is this going to be a harem?(hope so, whether the harem is human, pokemon or a mix is fine) and if not a harem will there be any romance?
Ryocor:I currently habe no plan for harmem or romance. None for a Human form either, I will probably make him able to speak to humans because a few powerful Pokémon where able to do that, I‘am thinking about Lucario and some of the legendarys. So Pokemon-Human Interaction becomes possible. I do plan that he travels with a women for some time but not permanantly. In the End I plan to make him really op, don’t know yet if I will make him rule some piece of land or if people will praise and pray to him like they do to some other legendary Pokémon. I guess we will see what happens. I‘am always open for suggestions.
doesn't really need a human form but I don't know how you feel about that kind of fetish of how this site feels about it.
Ryocor:I currently habe no plan for harmem or romance. None for a Human form either, I will probably make him able to speak to humans because a few powerful Pokémon where able to do that, I‘am thinking about Lucario and some of the legendarys. So Pokemon-Human Interaction becomes possible. I do plan that he travels with a women for some time but not permanantly. In the End I plan to make him really op, don’t know yet if I will make him rule some piece of land or if people will praise and pray to him like they do to some other legendary Pokémon. I guess we will see what happens. I‘am always open for suggestions.
DragonkingKyo:well then the human form and harem(human, pokemon or mix) is my suggestion then
Are you talking about the harem Fetish or the bestialitly fetish? I think I already know how to make a human form possible. I don‘t have anything against harems, i mean I‘am a man after all. My thing is there are already some harem Stories out there that‘s why I believe I would be good without it. And concerning the other fetish I would like to keep this novel/fan-fic child and *****-friendly except for all the violence of course. Which will probably happen.
DragonkingKyo:doesn't really need a human form but I don't know how you feel about that kind of fetish of how this site feels about it.
I was talking about the bestialitly fetish though I guess you couldn't call it that if he did get a human form or his harem was full a female pokemon. Another thing I wonder about is if he got a furry/werewolf-like form could you call it bestialitly or would it count as monster fetish? Which would make it confusing as some pokemon already appear almost human. I have know Idea why you think just because the some harem stories out there that your story would be good without it(though I'm not saying it wouldn't) but the way I feel the more harem stories the better but that just me and some other people that feel that way I fine with it not being a harem I just hope it will be one.
Ryocor:Are you talking about the harem Fetish or the bestialitly fetish? I think I already know how to make a human form possible. I don‘t have anything against harems, i mean I‘am a man after all. My thing is there are already some harem Stories out there that‘s why I believe I would be good without it. And concerning the other fetish I would like to keep this novel/fan-fic child and *****-friendly except for all the violence of course. Which will probably happen.
Hm. I will probably keep it completely human, pokemon with nothing furrie-werewolf like in between. Maybe I will build a harem for him I don‘t know yet and because I don‘t know I can‘t tell you if it‘s going to be a pokemon harem, a human harem when he is in his human form or a mix of both. I just am not far enough with the story and the thought of it, that I could tell you for sure.
DragonkingKyo:I was talking about the bestialitly fetish though I guess you couldn't call it that if he did get a human form or his harem was full a female pokemon. Another thing I wonder about is if he got a furry/werewolf-like form could you call it bestialitly or would it count as monster fetish? Which would make it confusing as some pokemon already appear almost human. I have know Idea why you think just because the some harem stories out there that your story would be good without it(though I'm not saying it wouldn't) but the way I feel the more harem stories the better but that just me and some other people that feel that way I fine with it not being a harem I just hope it will be one.
Ryocor:I currently habe no plan for harmem or romance. None for a Human form either, I will probably make him able to speak to humans because a few powerful Pokémon where able to do that, I‘am thinking about Lucario and some of the legendarys. So Pokemon-Human Interaction becomes possible. I do plan that he travels with a women for some time but not permanantly. In the End I plan to make him really op, don’t know yet if I will make him rule some piece of land or if people will praise and pray to him like they do to some other legendary Pokémon. I guess we will see what happens. I‘am always open for suggestions.
I will keep it in mind but i can‘t promise anything in that direction. Especially because don‘t all Legendarys have no gender?
DarkKnight32:Make him have a mate who he has child with pls and pls let it be a legendary pokemon that we know..
If I had to choose between the suggestions here, I would prefer it if he didn't have a human form. A bipedal form like Lucario would be fine. Seeing that start with the Growlithe, Susi, it would be funny to see her confusion when encountering the one she feels in love for again (so different from before) and try's to win him over. I'm fine with a harem, but if u decide to not go for it that's fine too.
to be honest that's pretty much the direction I would like to go with the MC. and I'm way more sure about that then what I want to do romance-wise. Last Mangas I read had some harem elements, which is ok in my eyes. But too much can also be a turn off for in my opinion. I kind of have to think of a manga that tried way too hard to show that the MC is strong and cool that it came of way way waaaayyyyy to unnatural. As far as you can make an op MC natural... And I want to try to not do the same mistake for my story,
BluewolfPT:If I had to choose between the suggestions here, I would prefer it if he didn't have a human form. A bipedal form like Lucario would be fine. Seeing that start with the Growlithe, Susi, it would be funny to see her confusion when encountering the one she feels in love for again (so different from before) and try's to win him over. I'm fine with a harem, but if u decide to not go for it that's fine too.