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Review Detail of MinMin_T in ONE NIGHT TOGETHER

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MinMin_T
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This original story is a nice little (60 chapters) gem. The setting in Texas is also somewhat refreshing, not the usual ancient China (rebirth / transmigration) or modern China (CEO type story). I do like this kind of genre but sometimes you need a change of taste 😁 It is a pity that the story hasn‘t attracted more readers. Why you should read it * as mentioned 60 chapters and a (happy) end 🥰 * story was easy to read and there were only minor grammar errors (didn‘t disturb the reading) * nice plot (the characters were believable and not OTP) * author grabbed the atmosphere of situations nicely For future projects * it would be nice, if there is a change of location or scene to use underlines or star keys; it was sometimes confusing when people spoke who weren‘t present a moment ago * maybe author could squeeze few chapters in with background information ( e.g why aunt Roro was the only relative or the relationship between the Calhouns and Andrew Johnson) * maybe use name who are not too similar like Mandy / Sandy -> there was some confusion with the twins at the end All in all: Kudos to author for starting and ending a well thought and well written project. Thank you 🙏

ONE NIGHT TOGETHER

JoannaAngel05

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JoannaAngel05
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😇😇😇 I'm really grateful for your review, comment and corrections. I will correct the end soonest...❤️❤️❤️

MinMin_T
MinMin_TLv14MinMin_T

You are welcome 👍 I am looking forward to your next project. 😊