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HNatsu
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Review Valid Till Chapter 117 Writing Quality: I'm impressed how much better it's gotten since she first started. Could still use some work but the errors are less frequent now. The author is really trying hard. Stability of Updates: If your tired of a slow updates then I recommend you read this, the update time is everyday, more than one chapter too. Character design and story development: While some may think the beginning is puzzling, it's quite easy to see where the story is going from prologue 1 and the synopsis. The characters are very well developed, we get a insight into the key characters thoughts a lot and their background stories are slowly unveiled during the course of the story. I like how the author doesn't solely emphasis the ML. The focus on the second ML is really interesting. I've never seen a novel that does it and it works quite well with the current pace, events of the story. Overall, I'm really looking forward to seeing where the rest of the story ends up. Keep up the good work.

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