Review Detail of A_Serendipitous_1 in The return of a spoiled villainess

The plot line is what hooked me. The story is fantastic and I’m excited to see where it goes. The characters are interesting and I’m a sucker for a good romance. However, the author may want to spend a little more time reviewing chapters or ask someone else to edit. Grammar aside (I recommend using Grammarly) I have noticed a lot of misused words such as “straight” rather than strength. With a little more editing this will be a riveting read.