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HaremQueen
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The story is still in it’s infancy (literally, the mc is still a kid) and haven’t progressed far yet, but I like it so far. Now, if the mc doesn’t only think with his di*k and focuses a lot more on the other aspects of the marvel universe, then I’d be just chipper! :)

Akore the Dominator

Werewolvking

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Werewolvking
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Yeah... some of his generals are going to be powerful woman. But besides that, he isn’t going to think with his dick

Werewolvking
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It’s be a waste to all my hard work of making a likeable character if all he did was have *** with every cute girl he meets.

HaremQueen
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That’s good. I’m glad at least some people agree with me. All over this site, all I see are harems, fu*kfests, and instant ‘lovers-for-life syndromes’. There are very few that actually focuses on the world and have a decent plot. I think we might be able to become great friends. ;)

Werewolvking:Yeah... some of his generals are going to be powerful woman. But besides that, he isn’t going to think with his dick
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

😀😉

HaremQueen:That’s good. I’m glad at least some people agree with me. All over this site, all I see are harems, fu*kfests, and instant ‘lovers-for-life syndromes’. There are very few that actually focuses on the world and have a decent plot. I think we might be able to become great friends. ;)
HaremQueen
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Too bad there isn’t a function on this site that allows private chat or a friend function. ;)

Werewolvking:😀😉
Werewolvking
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That’s why most people just use discord lol. But, we could always just email bomb the creators of the site lol till they add the function.

HaremQueen:Too bad there isn’t a function on this site that allows private chat or a friend function. ;)
HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv4HaremQueen

Hahaha. That might take awhile. I wouldn’t count on it.

Werewolvking:That’s why most people just use discord lol. But, we could always just email bomb the creators of the site lol till they add the function.
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

It’s ok. But what you could have done for what’s his names crew is have all the members have devil fruits. You could have named them the Devil pirates. And the irony of it is they are actually all super nice. You could have had Luffy be his rival. Pushing each other to new heights like asta and Yuno. Actually you could have made a fleet. Where the normal crew is comprised of all Zina users that are wolves or werewolves. That would have been awesome. Or you could just have the main crew have logia and the rest regular Hali users. There’s so many things lol

HaremQueen:Hahaha. That might take awhile. I wouldn’t count on it.
HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv4HaremQueen

Those are very awesome suggestions. I’m a bit of a practical type of person... so coming up with original stories, even if it’s set in one of my favorite anime world of all time, I just don’t see myself doing it. Besides, I’m not doing it to impress anyone... it’s purely for myself to have fun beyond anything else. If I have to rack my brains and worry constantly about coming up with what to write day and night, I’d just quit after like 10 chapters. Reason? I wouldn’t be having fun. Actually, those are really great ideas, why don’t you create your own one piece fanfic where the mc does that?

Werewolvking:It’s ok. But what you could have done for what’s his names crew is have all the members have devil fruits. You could have named them the Devil pirates. And the irony of it is they are actually all super nice. You could have had Luffy be his rival. Pushing each other to new heights like asta and Yuno. Actually you could have made a fleet. Where the normal crew is comprised of all Zina users that are wolves or werewolves. That would have been awesome. Or you could just have the main crew have logia and the rest regular Hali users. There’s so many things lol
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

Because I binge watched the series on a weekend once and don’t remember anything lol

HaremQueen:Those are very awesome suggestions. I’m a bit of a practical type of person... so coming up with original stories, even if it’s set in one of my favorite anime world of all time, I just don’t see myself doing it. Besides, I’m not doing it to impress anyone... it’s purely for myself to have fun beyond anything else. If I have to rack my brains and worry constantly about coming up with what to write day and night, I’d just quit after like 10 chapters. Reason? I wouldn’t be having fun. Actually, those are really great ideas, why don’t you create your own one piece fanfic where the mc does that?
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

Lol I have great ideas all the time just don’t have the passion to do them lol

HaremQueen:Those are very awesome suggestions. I’m a bit of a practical type of person... so coming up with original stories, even if it’s set in one of my favorite anime world of all time, I just don’t see myself doing it. Besides, I’m not doing it to impress anyone... it’s purely for myself to have fun beyond anything else. If I have to rack my brains and worry constantly about coming up with what to write day and night, I’d just quit after like 10 chapters. Reason? I wouldn’t be having fun. Actually, those are really great ideas, why don’t you create your own one piece fanfic where the mc does that?
HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv4HaremQueen

Hahaha...ain’t that the truth..

Werewolvking:Lol I have great ideas all the time just don’t have the passion to do them lol
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

I’m thinking of using nidhogg as one of Akore’s pets

HaremQueen:Hahaha...ain’t that the truth..
HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv4HaremQueen

That’d be cool....To have a serpent as a pet.

Werewolvking:I’m thinking of using nidhogg as one of Akore’s pets
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

Actually a dragon lol

HaremQueen:That’d be cool....To have a serpent as a pet.
HaremQueen
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Looks like a serpent to me so I’m calling it that.

Werewolvking:Actually a dragon lol
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

I now have a character with electric abilities in my story. I am now copyright claiming you for having one in your story. Even though yours came first.

HaremQueen:Looks like a serpent to me so I’m calling it that.
HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv4HaremQueen

Lol. I guess I’ll see you in court?

Werewolvking:I now have a character with electric abilities in my story. I am now copyright claiming you for having one in your story. Even though yours came first.
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

Tell that to the judge

HaremQueen:Lol. I guess I’ll see you in court?
Werewolvking
WerewolvkingAuthorWerewolvking

Tell that to the judge

HaremQueen:Lol. I guess I’ll see you in court?