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Nullsubstance
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The story is good, to much focus on the fights and little on dialogues and relationships. There is so many typings mistake that I get my head fuzzy! Is the worst I have seen on Webnovel until now! This should be regulate by the Webnovel, should not be allowed. Worst of all is the constant wrong names, I have to spend lots of mental energy to try to understand what actual character is taking about! In some cases is just impossible to understand! For example the first girlfriend he has, having a hard time discovering her real name, some time have the name of his friend, other times have the name of his grilfriend friend!! This is not just about being bed at English, I think this author might have some natural issues in real life remembering some things and translate to the novel. My advice is you are actualy a good author based on the story itself, but you need a damn good editor to work very close to you and decipher what you really mean, not just English fixing. See ya 👋🏼

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