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Review Detail of Rabiddoughnuts in Monster Integration

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Rabiddoughnuts
RabiddoughnutsLv153yrRabiddoughnuts

I don't know how this story has such a high rating, I have multiple books I read directly from authors websites where they publish their chapters themselves off any platform, I read several books from a couple random translators from writers who self publish on their own websites in japanese, and I read several books on here where apparently not a single writer has english as a first language, and this is by far the worst english I have ever seen, so many sentences don't make ANY sense, or have any meaning whatsoever because they are so butchered, I'm not willing to slog through when so many of the comments on reviews are talking about how terrible the grammar stays even past the 1000 chapter point, I sent a friend request on discord because I am a native English speaker, a writer myself, and willing to edit the story, because the base seems like it's an interesting story, I just can't tell for sure cause it's making my eyes bleed and giving me migraines trying to read it.

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Monster Integration

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Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

Try out the novel. Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. This is really a great and awesome novel. Truly one of a kind that I believe is unfair for others nit to see. I hope we can all support this novel. You will all love it without a doubt, just give it a chance. I really love this novel, and I think the author has more greater things installed for us. Thanks a lot.