Review Detail of SinOfSloth123 in Monster Integration

I read till ch 59 in this novel, I wanted to drop it way earlier than this but because some reviews said it gets better I kept going for a little while, of course it didn't get any better, aside from the grammatical mistakes, incomplete sentences, use of wrong words, the fight and sound descriptions are as bad as it gets, interactions between characters are very illogical sometimes, even the power system itself is not described in enough details. For what it's worth I think the premise is good but the author really needs to work on expressing himself better.