Great story and lots of fun to it. It has some problems with editing, however it starts to be a bit more manageable to read at chapter 18 and then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. So, it should start getting better not to long after chapter 34.
AnWan
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LIKEThere must have been a dispute between the author and the editor as the chapter quality declines to what it was before, absolute trash. Machine translation drivel. The response to the arrival of the editor was overwhelmingly positive however, editors presence was short lived. Probably due to the author's greed