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AnWan
AnWanAuthor5yrAnWan

I've already got an Editor and updated the chapters. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿจ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿก๐Ÿพ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿก๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿก๐Ÿซ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿด๐Ÿบ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿ–๐Ÿ๐ŸŒ๐Ÿž๐Ÿ–๐Ÿ”๐Ÿ๐Ÿ–๐Ÿ—บ๐Ÿ–๐Ÿš๐Ÿ–๐Ÿ๐Ÿ–๐Ÿ๐ŸŒ๐Ÿ—บ๐ŸŒŽ๐Ÿš๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿข๐Ÿจ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿ—ผ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿซ๐ŸŒ‰๐ŸŽ ๐ŸŒ‰๐ŸŽ ๐ŸŒ‰๐ŸŽ ๐ŸŒ‰๐ŸŽ ๐ŸŒ‰๐ŸŽ ๐ŸŽช๐ŸšŒ๐Ÿš๐ŸšŒ๐Ÿš๐Ÿš“๐Ÿš๐ŸšŒ๐Ÿš๐Ÿš‡๐Ÿš๐ŸšŒ๐Ÿš๐Ÿš๐Ÿšˆ๐Ÿš๐Ÿšˆ๐Ÿš๐Ÿšˆ๐Ÿš๐Ÿš‡๐Ÿš๐Ÿšˆโ›ฝ๐Ÿššโ›ฝ๐Ÿšจโ›ฝ๐Ÿšš๐Ÿšคโ›ฝ๐Ÿšจ๐Ÿšจโ›ฝ๐Ÿšš

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AnWan

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AnWan
AnWanAuthorAnWan

There will be forever ahead.

killrd3m0n_213:I love this story but your passing me of man why can't he ever keep a relationship it says romance but he keeps getting dumped
Wolfytopia
WolfytopiaLv6Wolfytopia

thanks! Looks like I need to wait for a week before reading it

Eddicted
EddictedLv5Eddicted

๐Ÿ‘

NewNEET
NewNEETLv5NewNEET

Story with first perspective alway

AnAxeToGrind
AnAxeToGrindLv5AnAxeToGrind

If your consider those chapters to be edited then your understanding of english is even worse than i thought.

AnWan
AnWanAuthorAnWan

Some are edited while some are not

AnAxeToGrind:If your consider those chapters to be edited then your understanding of english is even worse than i thought.
HuoHaiGege
HuoHaiGegeLv10HuoHaiGege

Bro, we'll edit the previous chapters for you. For free. If you want. It's just that the unedited chapters are spoiling the whole thing.

AnWan:Some are edited while some are not
AnWan
AnWanAuthorAnWan

Ok

HuoHaiGege:Bro, we'll edit the previous chapters for you. For free. If you want. It's just that the unedited chapters are spoiling the whole thing.
MysteryOriginal
MysteryOriginalLv11MysteryOriginal

Lmao ikr exactly what i was thinking

AnAxeToGrind:If your consider those chapters to be edited then your understanding of english is even worse than i thought.
Crycks
CrycksLv14Crycks

Definitely need to re edit the 40 first chapters ... i saw a comment telling that it get better at 36... but for now i cant read farther than chapter 4. The story looks good and there is a lot of work, its sad to loose so many reader because of just some chapters

WatermelonBandit
WatermelonBanditLv5WatermelonBandit

Keep to your word, start the editing process and we shall see at the bottom of the chapters you have fixed your name and a special shoutout, I look forward to seeing it.

HuoHaiGege:Bro, we'll edit the previous chapters for you. For free. If you want. It's just that the unedited chapters are spoiling the whole thing.
HuoHaiGege
HuoHaiGegeLv10HuoHaiGege

I'll start from next week. In middle of finals right now๐Ÿ˜… As soon as I'm done with em, I'll start editing em and posting in comments section. Ciao

WatermelonBandit:Keep to your word, start the editing process and we shall see at the bottom of the chapters you have fixed your name and a special shoutout, I look forward to seeing it.
Niblee
NibleeLv12Niblee

I'm enjoying the Story and the Content. I will admit I am struggling a great deal with what I think is grammar. Here is a tip I got in school have your work read out loud (there are app you can use to have things read to you) to you if it dosen't sound like something some one is talking it Probably needs more editing.

chamellysta
chamellystaLv10chamellysta

,๐Ÿ˜‚

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

hi is this an op mc?

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

hi is this an op mc?

Lastear
LastearLv15Lastear

I'm afraid I need to agree with some of the other statements. Please find a different editor and get them to go over the first several chapters. I had to stop reading after the third time a 'he' pronoun was used for a 'she'

AnWan
AnWanAuthorAnWan

Thank you for your comment. Would you mind telling me which chapters you have found these mistakes in?

Lastear:I'm afraid I need to agree with some of the other statements. Please find a different editor and get them to go over the first several chapters. I had to stop reading after the third time a 'he' pronoun was used for a 'she'
Lastear
LastearLv15Lastear

Actually, I might have gotten you mixed up with someone else regarding pronouns, but as for which chapter needs edited for this particular work, all of them. Add me on discord Lastear#3196, and then send me, say, chapter 88. I'll proofread it for you and point out the most common mistakes and explain them so you can apply it to other chapters.

AnWan:Thank you for your comment. Would you mind telling me which chapters you have found these mistakes in?
Lastear
LastearLv15Lastear

Or you can forward it to your editor to fix.

Lastear:Actually, I might have gotten you mixed up with someone else regarding pronouns, but as for which chapter needs edited for this particular work, all of them. Add me on discord Lastear#3196, and then send me, say, chapter 88. I'll proofread it for you and point out the most common mistakes and explain them so you can apply it to other chapters.
Scholar_Assassin
Scholar_AssassinLv5Scholar_Assassin

Bro it is already a premium novel, you should find a good Editor soon... Even the edited ones are not that good, if you need a good one contact me..

AnWan:Some are edited while some are not