I am the Author so I am obviously going to praise my novel. It is a very Good Novel.......... ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ด๐ฒ๐ค๐ฒ๐ค๐ฒ๐ค๐ฒ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐
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LIKEI'm not sure if you have had many people say this to you or not, but the grammar needs work, and I am willing, if you allow it, to go back to chapter 1 and edit this for you. I will also update your glossary with terms, levels, characters, locations, whatever you want. I find this to be an interesting novel, and I believe that it draws enough attention with the number of chapters written to gather fans, however people who start to read this may get frustrated and drop it before the grammar improves.