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FL is too pitiful and the system is too much of an a**hole for my liking 😒. Also, it gets old pretty quickly how quickly the FL gives into lust so quickly. Losing your V-card doesn't turn you into a nymphomaniac lol 😣! The author (and descriptive erotic scenes 😏😏😏) is great, but the FL is just not relatable and doesn't act anywhere near realistically causing a lack of reader investment. If this story was re-edited with the FL having a bit more backbone and the system being much less of an unlikable d-bag, I'd be able to get into it.
The Sinners' Queen
FallenBlue
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Well, actually, this is why the story is likable for me. Sometimes when I checked out the other stories, it's hard to find the FLs there to be logical because they become too witty and strong too fast. They have a reason. But transformation doesn't really come that easily in real life. Here it's shown how step by step she became ruthless and grey. The problem with this story is that in the first few chapters, FL just suddenly became a nympho after losing her v-card. The only good thing about it is that she didn't do it with others.