Honestly, when I read the first chapter I thought this novel is focus on dual-cultivation hahaha but turn out it's not like that. At first we might confuse about the "immoral system" and how this system works. So far the author has done a great job to developing this novel, from the story line and the characters. Even though sometimes I feel like to punch the MC hahaha (please forgive me XD) but I believe that the author will make a progress about her personality in the future. And now I'm following this story in my daily basis and I'm quite satisfied with the author's job. Well done đđđ
FallenBlue
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LIKEYou're welcome and good luck ;) I hope more people aware of this novel. Because this novel is rreeaaallllyyy good. I'm not a grammar police tho but I think your writing is quite neat and the pace of the story line is in order. Keep going and just be yourself. Don't loose to your original timeline/story because of some fans 'maybe' asked you doing this and that. The true fans will always support your decision <3
FallenBlue:Thanks for the review! I greatly appreciate it. XD
You're welcome and good luck ;) I hope more people aware of this novel. Because this novel is rreeaaallllyyy good. I'm not a grammar police tho but I think your writing is quite neat and the pace of the story line is in order. Keep going and just be yourself. Don't loose to your original timeline/story because of some fans 'maybe' asked you doing this and that. The true fans will always support your decision <3
FallenBlue:Thanks for the review! I greatly appreciate it. XD
winter_melon:You're welcome and good luck ;) I hope more people aware of this novel. Because this novel is rreeaaallllyyy good. I'm not a grammar police tho but I think your writing is quite neat and the pace of the story line is in order. Keep going and just be yourself. Don't loose to your original timeline/story because of some fans 'maybe' asked you doing this and that. The true fans will always support your decision <3