Review Detail of Veronica8 in Beauty is a Beast (REVISING!!!)

Amazing story! I'm new to cultivator stories, so I couldn't say too much on how it compares to similar others. Nor would I want to. What I like about this story is seeing all kinds of shades to the word "strong" that is present in the MC. She's a beauty with a strong demeanor. Strategic and calm in her fighting. The story has that survival game feel, where you're always kept on your toes. As a reader, it's thrilling. This is a story that takes you on a wild ride with a lot of beauties to contend with. I'm keen to see how strong our heroine's heart actually is when a certain beauty starts to knock on it :). I do have one piece of feedback regarding the technical delivery is to be mindful of mix-tensing (combination of past and present tense to a paragraph). Action stories are best kept to past tense, so short sentences can pack a punch when needed. Otherwise, it didn't impact on the flow of reading. I was able to be enthralled and captivated since the narrative is solid. Keep writing.