Review Detail of Luna1777 in Beauty is a Beast (REVISING!!!)

At first, there were a few words in it, but you keep improving along the chapters. Your words and also grammars, but I didn't want to talk about that. Because I know you will edit it later in the future. The story for me, well, there is quite interesting going on. The FL is cool, fighting, magic, furball, the fake queen (hehe). But maybe because I read a lot of wuxia and xiaxia novel I felt a bit bored. There was a slight similarity in it, but the difference is it is ML novel. XD. I'm not judging your story, it just my personal preference. You really twist fairytale into fighting magic novel, huh. Interesting. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your new chapter. You will improve along the time. Just don't push yourself too hard when writing it. Keep learning and get going with the novel!