Review Detail of Octogon in Beauty is a Beast (REVISING!!!)

My only issue with the story is the grammar (mainly tense and comma errors). However, I can still understand the story perfectly, so it’s fine. For update stability, I do not think the author has stated a particular schedule (unless I missed it). She usually informs readers in the author’s thoughts section if she does not think she’ll be able to upload. I like transmigration stories with female assassins, so this story is kinda my cup of tea. I like the character designs so far. Although, there are some cliches with the shallow female side characters who automatically hate on the MC for stupid reasons(She’s pretty. Although she hasn’t done anything to me, she might be a love rival). The world seems interesting. This is the first transmigration novel I have read where the MC truly plans on returning to her original world to settle some old grudges. I really like this novel. Keep up the good work, author!