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Review Detail of paintedaisys in Evil Prince, Come Play With Me

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paintedaisys
paintedaisysLv23yrpaintedaisys

DO NOT BOTHER READING. Seriously, I wasted time even trying to read this book. Firstly, the book starts off so strong with the fl r*ping the ml. Like the hell? And this isn’t a spoiler, this should be stated in the synopsis❗️ In addition, this book is so RUSHED. Like goddamn, slow down. The first 2 chapters would’ve taken about 5 chapters in a decent book that is at a normal pace. Plus the author randomly jumps from one scene to another so abruptly, it makes you so confused at what is going on in the story. The flow is terrible and the random scenes make it even worse when reading. The FL is...new, not a fan of her character personally. And ml is meh, typical lead tbh. But author, this story could’ve been so much better (especially if you didn’t include r*pe, and had made it consensual?! wow do authors on here know what this word consensual is??😲). And I’m also wondering if you just added random stuff when writing that’s irrelevant to the plot because it popped into your head, cause that’s what I feel as I read the story. Wont be spending any more time reading this,but hope this review was helpful to those who were wondering if it’s worth it.

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lovelybaer
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Yep but can I get how far you read cuz I read pretty far and it doesn’t seem to be getting better. Waste my time or spend it elsewhere?

paintedaisys
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I could not even get that far,, personally if it doesn’t hook me in the beginning and the writing is bad, I don’t continue the story. I wouldn’t waste your time on this book when there’s plenty of others that have a way better plot/writing.

lovelybaer:Yep but can I get how far you read cuz I read pretty far and it doesn’t seem to be getting better. Waste my time or spend it elsewhere?
lovelybaer
lovelybaerLv11lovelybaer

The beginning chapters caught my interest, but reading on I was disappointed...

paintedaisys:I could not even get that far,, personally if it doesn’t hook me in the beginning and the writing is bad, I don’t continue the story. I wouldn’t waste your time on this book when there’s plenty of others that have a way better plot/writing.