Review Detail of Greedski in Re: Florensia Online

Item: Re: Florensia Online
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

GreedskiLv45yrGreedski

Okay, the premise is, gamer guy dies and reincarnates in his favorite MMORPG, extremely overused, but with the right settings you can get away with it. The grammar is... kind of bad. You mix the present and past tense, punctuation is barely present and you need to capitalize the I dude.

Re: Florensia Online

LawsGod

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GreatOverlordLv5GreatOverlord

yea but at least you didn't give it a 1 star lol I seen people put 1 star cuz they just hate the author for not doing something they wanted or etc

5yr

GreedskiLv4Greedski

Lol, nah, I just want to give real reviews and help new authors grow.

5yr

LawsGodAuthorLawsGod

Thanks a lot for reviewing. I m a beginner writer. I accept any review and i will try my best to correct my mistakes. Anyway this may be like the other typical novels but it s a bit different because i changed alot in the settings. I will be making what happend in the game as a myth that happend in the past and the mc will have that power from past or something like that. The story will talk about his adventures traveling between islands and lvling up on land and sea. Cant say anymore cauz that will be spoiler xD

5yr

LawsGodAuthorLawsGod

You said the grammar is bad but what do you think about my writing style? The 1st chapter was kind of childish . It was a bad start but please read the other chapters and tell me you opinion.

5yr

MelshanLv7Melshan

The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍

LawsGod:Thanks a lot for reviewing. I m a beginner writer. I accept any review and i will try my best to correct my mistakes. Anyway this may be like the other typical novels but it s a bit different because i changed alot in the settings. I will be making what happend in the game as a myth that happend in the past and the mc will have that power from past or something like that. The story will talk about his adventures traveling between islands and lvling up on land and sea. Cant say anymore cauz that will be spoiler xD

5yr

LawsGodAuthorLawsGod

Still thinking about it for the moment

Melshan:The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍

5yr