Review Detail of AKMP in Chasing my little fox
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The storyline is hard to understand.Sometimes I can't understand who's talking about whom so I have to read again to find the plot.So I think it will a great story if the storyline can be understood a little better.
Chasing my little fox
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From chapter 62 I will put in (---) the name of the person talking at the begining so everizing that apear before another(---) apear is that person saing or point of vew. I whish that this will help you read my novel more at easy. A little spoiler of how I´m writing my novel: I only make the couple that I want to apear and a litlle description so as you can see even I don´t knows how many chapters there would be.