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Review Detail of ca_l in Supreme Origin: Time King

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A funny use of the norse mythology and the others with a fast pacing rather nice if compared with many other novels way too slow in a rather complicated world where gods, magic and cultivation are mixed Though you really need an editor to correct the mistakes because sometimes it can be hard to understand what you mean, I also saw that you repeated some sentences twice on some chapters. So an editor could help you correct what maybe you won't see when doing it yourself (don't forget that your readers will be happy to help you if you need us for that). And also it's only my opinion but 6 and 10 years old is kind of too young for what happens to them even if they are more mature or grown up. Keep going and good luck Mr/Ms Author 😁

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Supreme Origin: Time King

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