Review Detail of Sgt_Ragingbutete in Start by Becoming a Mangaka

i'm extremely disappointed the system was like important for few chapters then got forgotten he doesn't really care about the rewards he doesn't want to destroy the organization that's been tormenting haibara cause it's "complicated" he can literally do anything in the world he is mary sue in this mothaduckin novel overall i'm extremely disappointed in this. wasted my time reading 700+ novel waiting for the system only to read him using 3 tickets and forgetting the other 6 or 9 damn too many harem members without character development and forgetting other girls yo why not make 3 or 4 girls only but with developed character? he keeps flirting with girls then forget some of them once again i'm extremely disappointed