Review Detail of Andylovescandy in Start by Becoming a Mangaka
Review detail
Writing Quality: 2 star = The grammar is very messy, it feels like I am reading a novel from lmntl, but its more confusing. Its still understandable to say the least so 2 stars. Stability of Updates: 5 star = Author keeps releasing a lot of chapters which is nice. Story development: 1 star = I have read the author works before and I realized that he keeps wanting to push this novel in the same direction as Hitose note, which was way better than this. The only difference is, some new anime like Detective conan is added and instead of taking Raku's place author went for his brother. The relationships are awkward, I get that, its the type of novel were MC is great and every girls keeps falling for our MC but this is the same place where the author fails and makes this novel worse than Hitose note or any other novel he wrote before. The girls keep falling for MC but Author keeps cock blocking himself, even though we all know that he will have s*x with the girl a chapter later on. Character design: 1 star: Even though the characters are from other animes, author fails to maintain the character's behaviors even though he doesn't have to think about any of them. (I know its hard to write and bla bla bla... but these characters already exist in other works, so its just copying the character's characteristics but author still fails to do so.) Let's leave the other character's for now, but the author can't decide even on the MC characteristics. Sometimes he is dense, sometimes he is way to clever and flirty, sometimes he is a gentleman but other time is a creepy pervert. He keeps acting like every girl belongs to him even though sometimes he keeps stopping himself from getting them. Like make your mind, do you want them or not. And the characters, Every chapter at least 5 new characters are introduced and every one of them sounds and acts like a harem candidate, By the count of it, MC is fu*king every women in his town. I am on chapter 58 right now and I lost count of how many girls there are by the 10th chapter. World Background: 2 Star = The world is very confusing since a lot of different anime's are cramped into one place. But props to the author for trying but it could be done better. Conclusion: I am not hating on author or his work like I said, I liked his previous novel before but I am quite disappointed since instead of improving he went downhill from what he created. If you want to read this novel keep in mind that its not going to be sophisticated in the very least. Its like a very plain ****** novel written by a hyped up author, who wants to make his novel good but it turns out bad. It's not that bad like some novels in this site but its not good either. If you want to binge read something due to you having a lot of free time, go ahead and read this novel. I suggest author to focus on making a single chapter perfect than releasing 10 in a day. Quality over Quantity.
Start by Becoming a Mangaka
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Why should I have to do work to enjoy something, Of course grammar shouldn't be the only thing you're looking for in a book but if you consistently use something like "ur" instead of "your" then obviously you don't care about the quality of the chapters just the quantity which is a disservice to the story Andy th either stories which are within this one.
Celestails:I think its ur brain who have a problem that u still cant understand u just have to use ur brain for those missing or wrong grammars ur just a lazy bum that even just using ur brain to read and analyze it urself u complain
I dont know if your reading what he said but i'll say it then since you are a perfectionist that you complain i use ur instead of your then ill say it what he's complaining is simple mistakes like spelling and scrambled words that can be understand already just by usiing your brain to analyse it in a matter of seconds there are a lot of new novel that are a lot worse and yet he complains with such simple things its not you need a f*cking dictionary to analysed the missing words from the sentence and yet complain and compare it to mtl translation
Jaykay2307:Why should I have to do work to enjoy something, Of course grammar shouldn't be the only thing you're looking for in a book but if you consistently use something like "ur" instead of "your" then obviously you don't care about the quality of the chapters just the quantity which is a disservice to the story Andy th either stories which are within this one.
I agree with you I was just saying in general not specifically this one. It has much better grammar than a lot of others personally I dislike it due to the fliflopping on the mcs personality
Celestails:I dont know if your reading what he said but i'll say it then since you are a perfectionist that you complain i use ur instead of your then ill say it what he's complaining is simple mistakes like spelling and scrambled words that can be understand already just by usiing your brain to analyse it in a matter of seconds there are a lot of new novel that are a lot worse and yet he complains with such simple things its not you need a f*cking dictionary to analysed the missing words from the sentence and yet complain and compare it to mtl translation
Moon_represent:Can you guy stop talking about grammar and talk about the real problem of this novel?
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Moon_represent:Can you guy stop talking about grammar and talk about the real problem of this novel?
Who cares about the grammar? We’re on Webnovel, where it’s almost impossible to find an author who writes in good English. There are some exceptions, of course, but don’t expect too much from this platform. Besides that, the real issues are the ones previously mentioned: character inconsistency, story development, relationships, etc. I haven’t read the story yet, but it’s certainly not the grammar that matters to me personally; instead, it’s the body of the story and the characters themselves.