Review Detail of Jaybay in Guild Wars

I'm sorry author but this is just bad. The fact he's reincarnated give the MC a huge advantage which he should take advantage of, but the rewards are to big and there's no payoff. In addition with he 4 grader conversations between characters is just a turn off. I tried but this wn isn't for me, maybe someone younger could read past the few glaring plot armor and plot holes but I cannot.