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Review Detail of Alakabam in Guild Wars

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Alakabam
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An elaborate story set in two conjoined worlds, virtual and reality come together to form the backdrop for one of the best VR-novel stories on this Website. The usual overdone Reincarnation genre gets to relive its glory years through this story. All described and outfitted by tasteful grammar and a superb writing style. Now onto the meat of the review. For the last week I had been searching for a new VR-novel, since most of the ones I'm enthralled with and am waiting on updates for have been on hiatus or are currently way too slow with their updates. There's a long list of novels in this exact genre I've read but the ones that match up to this one aren't many. Notable ones are: -Phoenix Phire (Small hiatus should continue in a few weeks) -Rise of the Undead Legion (Very slow with updating) -Realm of Myths and Legends (Currently on hiatus) If you've read any of the above then this one is a must have on your reading list. Vice versa aswell. --- There's a lot to say for this novel and I'll try to keep it somewhat short, atleast for my standards. --- The world is as I mentioned before very elaborate more so because both 'worlds'(VR and Reality) get explored and explained, however there's no long info dumps to be found. Everything has it's time and place beyond the initial introduction which feels easy to grasp whilst reading. Never at one point did I get annoyed by exposition. Both worlds feel as if they are filled with life and adventures/interesting things. One thing I like about VR-novels among other things are the Game-Elements and they are described beautifully here, with the proper appearance. Author seemingly puts a lot of effort into making sure the numbers add up and can always be found in the chapter comments if anything is incorrect or mixed up. Overall I really like the world-building of this Novel and it feels alive. There's a few Side-Stories added in showing other people's perspectives which help in that regard. --- Characters come alive and feel genuine. Their feelings can be experienced and are played with by the Author in a realistic way. The main character has multiple personalities which after reincarnating and progressing through the story alter and change in regards to what happens in a realistic way. I usually don't really like characters which are at the utmost top of the Dao of shamelessness as many readers have called it but I find it passable, plus he doesn't use it a lot. I feel like the interactions between Qion Qi(Think I'm writing this wrong ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ) are somewhat 'too' silly sometimes. There's only so many fart jokes which I can personally enjoy before that gets old, sometimes I wish he could just be the bad ass lion sidekick I imagine him to be instead of the comedic relief of the story. Even without him farting and such there's enough humor in the Novel to get around. Author in the beginning got a lot of shit for the Female main character which I don't think he deserves. Admittedly I've come in after all the changes were made so I don't know exactly how the story was before but as it stands now I've never hated or disliked her. I actually like her drive and motivation, backstory and how she treats the people around her. I think she's well written. MC's guild is filled with fleshed out and loveable characters which I like reading Side-Stories about, aswell as interactions between them and the MC. His various love interests are the same, filled with different realistic emotions which keep them feeling alive. They add a lot to the story and I like that there's a few chapters worth of stories inbetween Arcs filled with conversations and interaction between them all. --- Writing is superb and is easy to understand and get through, the reading experience is delightful. The editor(Devil's Advocate) does his job great aswell. Anyways I need to cut it off here, can only have so much in a review, one day I'll get better at that. Thanks for writing Author (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。

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The_F00L
The_F00LLv10The_F00L

So it’s harem

Alakabam
AlakabamLv14Alakabam

Depends on if it's the Virtual or Real world, outside of the game world MC is so far loyal to the FMC even though it has been implied that she wouldn't mind it. In the virtual world he definitely has a certain amount of harem candidates but I won't spoil you who or what they are. It's a great novel I suggest you go and find out yourself. Also there's R-18 scenes which are a nice addition. Have a good one! /ᐠ。ꞈ。ᐟ\

The_F00L:So it’s harem
Alakabam
AlakabamLv14Alakabam

I realise the "Who or what" statement can lead to some questions about the sexuality of the harem candidates. They are all female, no yaoi here.

Alakabam:Depends on if it's the Virtual or Real world, outside of the game world MC is so far loyal to the FMC even though it has been implied that she wouldn't mind it. In the virtual world he definitely has a certain amount of harem candidates but I won't spoil you who or what they are. It's a great novel I suggest you go and find out yourself. Also there's R-18 scenes which are a nice addition. Have a good one! /ᐠ。ꞈ。ᐟ\
ScionOfDegeneracy
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Now I definitely have to read it..

The_F00L:So it’s harem
CyberJerk
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K

PKing3456
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Yeah

PKing3456
PKing3456Lv4PKing3456

Yeah

J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13J_S_2998

Do you know is there any romance in the story? Or is it more just action and sex? I dont mind a harem setting as long as its not the "mc ignores them all" version. Thanks for any info.

BlanKing
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sleepingbeats
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Constructive review!! Liked.

Useless_reader
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:)

Odla_LeandroF
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I agree

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JAMES_MCVAY
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Hello

Badus59
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Good

Badus59
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Good

ScionOfDegeneracy:Now I definitely have to read it..
Dreoklevi
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Very accurate and detailed review, thanks!

Billy_brown
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I Agree

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macleen
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Hey sorry I’m late. I just finished reading Reincarnation of the strongest sword god and I have never been pissed about reading a story before. If you know the story could you say this is an improvement/better?