Review Detail of hxaaa3 in New Game+
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I was hoping for something good based on the ratings ... alas, chapters 1-3 were pretty bad. Writing quality and language were the biggest issues for me and they made me drop this within 3 chapters. The author jumps between tenses and generally has issues with sentence structure and coherence. It almost feels like something machine-translated at times.
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Rapture_Tales
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grammatical errors depending on how often and big they are is a huge issue, if it happens often and u have to sit there trying to figure out what something is supposed to say or mean, then it affects the whole immersion and reading quality. me especially who builds the world in my mind while reading, if i get stuck on words and sentences trying to figure out what something says, im no longer in that world, im at my desk reading on my computer and it affects how i perceive the story. you see it as a tiny problem but its not as small as you think it is.
G_Sucks:bruh reading that few chapters only isnt a review 😂😂.. and 2 star because of grammatical error, wtf?
your argument sounds right, however we need to stick with the parameters of the platform we are using to do rating. not what one feels like giving. based on the parameters dealt with by the platform the rating of 2stars is uncalled for, when the reason given is just grammatical issues (which also seems to be not the case)
N7NobodyCats:grammatical errors depending on how often and big they are is a huge issue, if it happens often and u have to sit there trying to figure out what something is supposed to say or mean, then it affects the whole immersion and reading quality. me especially who builds the world in my mind while reading, if i get stuck on words and sentences trying to figure out what something says, im no longer in that world, im at my desk reading on my computer and it affects how i perceive the story. you see it as a tiny problem but its not as small as you think it is.
