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Review Detail of Jielo in I Love You, Monster: The Blindfolded Wife x The Masked Husband

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Overall the story is very interesting but the more I read the more I was feeling fed up. Not to the point to stop reading though. I’ll talk about the bad points first and then the good ones. I feel like the main problem is the mix between chinese and japanese. It makes the world very strange. I know that not every characters are from the same country but it makes absolutely no sense that Sei is from a sort of japanese background (based on his and his family’s name). His grandfather is Mikazuki something (I only remember his family name sorry) but Sei’s mother is called Fei which sound chinese. Like how can a father and his daughter have names from different countries ??Davi’s family is also from a japanese lineage but she called Sei with his fake appearance "Sei-er". Er means two in chinese so maybe Davi lived in a country with chinese background but it makes no sense because her foster family named her Davi which isn’t chinese or even japanese. And her brother Haru, who I assumed is the son of her foster parents, has a japanse name ???? Also I feel like the author forgot some of her/his characters. Like where is Yijin, Yujin and Kaide ? We hardly see Haru and we don’t even know why he became an idol or anything about him. Also Yijin who was like Davi’s shadow in the beginning is not mentioned. We don’t even know things about Yijin and his twin Yujin. And what’s the point of introducing Yujin if he only appeared once ?? We don’t know what are Yijin and Yujin’s background or what they’re doing now that Sei is a tycoon. Also I can say that they’re twins but their names make them two persons unrelated ? Like Yijin sounds a chinese name but Yujin sounds like a korean name. I thought that Yijin and Haru were friends because they spend time together playing games in the early chapters. But well Yijin disappeared, his twin Yujin disappeared after a single appearance and Haru is too busy with his job. I also liked Kaide, Davi’s sparring partner and the supposed gay person. I expected him to find a lover but the author forgot about him. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I know they’re only minor characters but still. The author forgot them and introduced Kir which I don’t know who he is and why he was only introduce after more than 100 chapters. The author didn’t even explain things about him. Like if he was a trustworthy subordinate, the author should at least explain where he was at the beginning of the book. I don’t know maybe he was doing a mission, or he was spying Sei’s enemies or he was missing. But well we don’t know so I can only imagine. However the book is well written, we can understand what the author wanted to say, the plot is interesting. I like how the author focus on the side couple (which I find more interesting than the main even though sometimes they annoyed me) but they’re slow. Like you like each others, why would you create more misunderstandings and drama... Just go get your marriage certificate. But sometimes the story is too slow. Also I like that Davi isn’t weak or dumb. There’s already too many novels with weak and dumb FLs. Davi can defend herself and she want to protect Sei and everyone who is dear to her. It’s quite refreshing to have a FL like this (but she cry a lot because she is weak-hearted...) So I’ll recommend this book to people who are bored and who don’t mind the strange world. It’s not the best out here but it’s still good if you don’t have anything to read. If the author is reading my review, I hope you can take in account what I’m feeling and improve your writing.

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I agree with a lot of the points you made here. However, I think the author slacked on Davi and her strength. Like when Little Shin and them were surrounded at the amusement park. In real life Davi would've been worried and scared, yes. But, she would've became a beast too. (The saying 'mother bear protecting her young' comes to mind.) And yet Davi went ashen in color and basically froze. As a mother myself, it doesn't matter if you have training of a soldier or not (I do not.), she would have went into a kill anyone that dares to threaten my child state and she didn't, she was leaving it all up to Sei. Smh