Review Detail of Ouhbaba in Purple Dawn Till Dusk : dearest through the time

what is wrong with the synopsis? you even didn't read the story...

Yeah same here.... if u can't even write the Synopsis in Proper english than how will u write a Story.....

I would suggest you to write in a language that you are more familiar with or look for a good soul who would agree to be your editor. I am sure that a lot of people, like me, will never try your story simply because of your poor mastery of english. I still wish you the best of luck but man...that is some terrible english

thank you for your advice...^^ as I have written many times I will give my best to fix it

thank you for your concern... if you can't read it and don't read it... don't waste your time on my terrible english story, as I have said many times I will try my best to fix it. and thank you for your suggestion i will try looking for editor... have a good day sir...^^

Dang, y'all go and make the author feel dejected lile that. But if you dont like it then don't waste your time. All in all, dont judge a story based on the synopsis.

Reviews are meant to be honest so the author can improve from the feedback. The author seemed to understand it. Also, a synopsys exists exactly so you can judge if you might like the novel.

If you would like, I can edit it for you. I quite enjoy reading stories like these so I can spot the mistakes and correct them while reading.:) (There are still many mistakes even after the editing in the synopsis.)

speak properly, her books are great... if you have nothing good to say then don't speak