Review Detail of Nightmare_Taichou in My Life belongs to you

First and foremost, the ideas of the story is there, but the problem lies with the execution. The earlier chapters were a bit off for me, but you got better as the book progressed. But please, review these earlier chapters because it may deter prospective readers. But all in all, the plot is interesting. Just fix what needs to be and your story will great. Good luck!