Review Detail of Xincerely in My Life belongs to you

I like the idea of the story about the girl being send to her grandparents' house and then meeting the guy, but it's not really my kind of novel lol There are a good handful of grammar mistakes in the story, especially with capitalization and word-spacing, but you're a new author, so I completely understand that ^~^ One thing I definitely recommend changing would be the lack of descriptions in the story. The chapters are pretty short, and there's only 1-2 sentences each paragraph. It's a lot of speaking, not showing. I would love to see more descriptions between her interactions and not the brief summary of it (occasional is fine, but not when the entire story is like that). Overall, it's a pretty interesting story that most romance-novel readers will enjoy~