This is a beginner author that I want to encourage so I will be lenient in this review! The story is nice and is understandable even if the grammar and the spelling need to be fixed. The story advance quickly and there is enough conflics with family and friends to make the novel interesting . This novel has potential to growth! Give it a try to encourage a begginer Author! A few tips to the Author: Use metaphores to show the characters feelings. Learn to use dialog tags. Re-read your work and fix grammar and spelling before updating.You can do it! Keep up the good work!
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