Review Detail of M_T in My Life belongs to you

Honestly , you need to spend more time editing the story . your story is about romance , so less world building and more character depth . when using names (riya) should always be Riya capital the first letter of the word , also about travailing aboard part, it an important point don't try to put it in a few word , describe her grandparent her home , her felling . I like the idea , and the environment around the MC will make things interesting , but I will like it less if the love interest is attracted to the MC without reason , and lastly remember that they are ***** and got high degree of education , so they won't simply 'fall in love ' .