Review Detail of AndrewSirr in Offer to the CEO
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Very confusing story and the writing quality is not very good. Well it's normal for ******* author's but the problem is author keeps repeating lines and stuffs again and again. Each chapter starts from the previous chapters last sentence which is very irritating for me to read. Moreover, the paragraphs and conversation between characters are so long and detailed that I feel like it's not some adults conversation rather, preschool kids. Further more, the concept isn't original since I have already read countless of same plot eg: Trial Marriag, so please don't write details stuffs, though the ONLY positive side is the FL is a foreigner rather than a Chainese ( sorry for spoiling this part). Overall I am giving 3•8 even though I am giving up this story (for the first time in my life in WN), but you tried your best writing it and the stability of updates is far better than other novels. Well done. *I advise you to backtrack your previous chapters and try to edit it. Use space and enters and make the dialogue short. Moreover, Don't start your chapter with the previous chapter's last para.
Offer to the CEO
klmorgan
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Well, she is still a new author so let's give her some time to sort out things. Hope she will solve issues and the writing quality will get better.☺️
pixxie:I felt the same the writing style is very boring
It's okay. Take your time. By the way, I don't even know what was censored, i think i wrote S-impl-e (╯'□')╯︵ ┻━┻ So don't feel bad/offended, please...🤗
klmorgan:Thank you for the feedback. I will take it on board, and adjust things going forward for some of the issues raised. Please bare with me as it is m first attempt at a web novel (or any writing of this type, and it is taking time to get use to writing in this style).
Actually I am not offended. As someone told me, when you are invested in something you do not see the errors in it. It takes time to see them.
AndrewSirr:It's okay. Take your time. By the way, I don't even know what was censored, i think i wrote S-impl-e (╯'□')╯︵ ┻━┻ So don't feel bad/offended, please...🤗
Well said! I have second thoughts now. I think I'll read your story again after it's been polished and edited! 😊😊😊
klmorgan:Actually I am not offended. As someone told me, when you are invested in something you do not see the errors in it. It takes time to see them.
AndrewSirr:Well, she is still a new author so let's give her some time to sort out things. Hope she will solve issues and the writing quality will get better.☺️
