Review Detail of Maliciousgirl in Offer to the CEO

Thank you for your comments. If I could ask you to please bare with the story, and you will find things that challenge and confront you, but help you to fall in love with the characters over time.

I think u need to proffread every chapter before uploding them or use apps like grammar checker or grammarly.😊 To avoid criticism for the grammar and construction of sentences.

I can understand where you are coming from, and take your criticisms on board for what they are - a constructive means to improve the novel. However everyone approaches their writing from a different perspective taking into account their background, and their first language. My full time job and with English being my primary language, means that from a standpoint I will draft completely differently to a non-native English speaker. However I am slowly reviewing previously posted chapters, and re-editing drafted chapters before I post them to fix the issue, as I cannot justify an editor as this is simply for fun!