this is a great novel and no offense but you can really tell the difference in quality between your 1st version and this one haha. I personally miss the system and the accurate stat page that shows his level and skills but the story does flow better overall its a big difference between both versions and they both have a charm to them, i personally enjoyed the first version more but i'm excited to see how you write out this one thank you author
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