So far story is good, even if the mc already ovepowered, so u should stick with the original story plot maybe or little twist i like how mc want to make better choice than previous life, but i also think u should not make all arc with good ending, also need sad ending for better character development. But overall i like the story especially im fan with original story, just see different view with original spice..
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