This is an excellent work.. The plot basis is very solid... If the writing style could be changed a bit...it will go to the top of the rankings... Anyway, Author-san, I wish you good luck and am very excited for your work.
Indie131998
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LIKEIndie131998:light-kun, please give me an updated review bro, I like reading reviews like yours
Indie131998:on my book, i have seen three to four users writing their own novels so yeah