Review Detail of Rairaidani in Perverted Luffy and your Harem (R-18)

Item: Perverted Luffy and your Harem (R-18)
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

RairaidaniLv135yrRairaidani

For now good except writing, dont know if u drop it like the others. Please dont use capital font in all word, and dont over using exclamation mark. I dont know about grammar too but i know author that dont do well with grammar use 'Grammarly' app, just try it dude. And waitinng next chapter and scene

Perverted Luffy and your Harem (R-18)

Luther1

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Luther1AuthorLuther1

thanks man, this is first time I write a "book", I will certainly improve these aspects.

5yr

Luther1AuthorLuther1

and is four chapter for week

5yr

RairaidaniLv13Rairaidani

Dont do fast pace in story, and no homo too please. Its disgusting!

Luther1:thanks man, this is first time I write a "book", I will certainly improve these aspects.

5yr