Review Detail of Jamison_C in Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith

I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter. Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs. I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here? All the best!