Review Detail of ChaoticOrder101 in Reborn into Fairy Tail (Gone for now)

Firstly I enjoy this novel or else I wouldn't be here duh. There's some good enjoyment in ***** slapping and power stomping cause admit it being badass and cool is what's it all about and shock factor never forget that. Now however I have this issue with systems. It makes one gather various powers too quickly and too easily making this messy however I liked how the author merged them to simplify it and show the draw back when acquiring powers. Power always comes at a cost. Whether you lose your soul, body, rationality, emotional control or being pushed to one extreme in it just make sure there's a consequence which would make the MC hesitate to rush for more power. I'm glad the author does this but try to make the MC come up with original techniques inspired from his own powers like fire devil slayer magic aspect devours/burns magic energy or curses his opponents over time to weaken their physique which would go far to show the demonic part of the devil slayer magic perhaps even burns law magic or even sealing magic so he can't be contained. He's already got enough power now he needs to go outside the norm and make it exotic instead of pure destruction. Try making the MC learn ways to seal and capture his enemies maybe debuff them or use his magic to sense invisible enemies or long range detection e.g use fire devil slayer magic to detect body temperatures or other slayer magic to detect their bioelectricity hell make him use lightning techniques to accelerate but let him only use it if he deems them worthy which is good character development. Let him only use the system when he's in a tight pinch or needs a support type magic. And finally work on believable character personalities. Erza doesn't blush often even if your strong and handsome she deems you capable and that's enough. To make her fall for MC try different ways like hmm oh she likes cake! Get through to her through her stomach that should be believable and she'll have good impressions of you. When she's pushed to her limit in a serious battle show a heroic side with proper dialogue on righteousness blah blah to make her think favourable of you and that you have a good mindset. When Jellal comes in for the tower arc is the best time to strike her heart since it'll she's venerable because she feels like she abandoned her friends in her early childhood. When the tower is destroyed comforts her (with touches or a hug) and tell her how much MC cares about her as a strong independent woman and as *his* teammate even in her weakest moment but be vague cause your going harem route and string her along ******* style. You need a slow relationship with your girls from likes or good impressions...then interests...to love. I still think Mira is suppose to be vulgar and belligerent with erza because she only became peaceful because she lost lisanna and she mentally block her magic due to trauma in the original story but since this timeline is different and lisanna is alive it should be more warlike Mira I believe. Lucy is spoil rich girl who dreams of adventure and is a fan just be charming and sweet and she's in the bag...……(perhaps literally)