Review Detail of Yetiman in The Fleet

An overall good story that has been refined into a great story. Compared to the earlier version “Military System,” this story has kept all of the best things that made its predecessor great while improving upon the things that had room for improvement. One of the most notable improvements of this story compared to the first version is the pacing of the plot. Rather than starting from the bottom, Add is given more weapons earlier on in order to speed up the pace making it easier to get into the plot and story development instead of the grinding for “CP” in order to purchase an actual firearm. I am a grammar Nazi, but when it comes to WebNovel authors my standards aren’t the same for Fanfiction or other sites that are used predominantly by native English speakers. Taking that into account there are very few typos and mistakes compared to some of the other more popular stories, but most of all this story reads well. Again, this story is probably one of the best non-Wuxia stories that incorporates certain lit-rpg elements without making half of the pages look like status screen. Keep it up!! This is getting better every chapter!! Cheers