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Review Detail of Galen_C123 in Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel

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The writing quality isn't bad, but the way you tell the story is rushed and kinda feels like a summary. A lot of the characters are poorly portrayed and the timeline is all over the place.

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Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel

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noted. thx for your feedback

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godfreyngszeAuthorgodfreyngsze

I notice you read until chapter 5 ... i agree my starting is bad... but i am wondering is my later chapter bad too? either way cheers