you did a good job with introducing the new character and the scenario looks pretty good so far I don't know what you have in store for the goblin serum but I expect something great like making it complete to make him stronger and I like the way your story uses the knowledge the mc has instead of doing nothing when he can help people but still make the story progress the way it was supposed to one word of advice try to maintain your upload rate with a normal schedule.
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