Well the grammar is good but what irritates me is the most of how so many parts of the story contradicts each other and when something is different no explanation is given. And the so called “gAmER sYsTEm” is no where near the system from the Manga the gamer it’s more of dating system for all it’s worth and the only similarities between it is the gamers body and mind. Atleast the updates is constant.
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