My eyes are bleeeding. Im sorry, but this story is unreadable.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At first i thought you where being dramatic, but when i started to read and see it for myself..... GOD DAM!!.... i can't understand anything. i didn't even make it past chapter 1. maybe instead of throwing new chapters he should work on rewriting all the previous chapters.