From what I glean of the first 17 chapters, this is really quite terrible. The writing style is jarring. Things jump all over the place and there’s no context to actions. We aren’t give much insight into the thoughts of characters so we basically don’t know them. The events in the story so far happen with an ease that seems unrealistic. I was really looking forward to this. It had an interesting and unique plot summary. There was potential to do so much more.
An Xiaoning
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LIKETangTangsKidnaping:Idiot who doesn't deserve her. It'll be really painful to reach day first though. But it gets a lotta better. Spoiler. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . Second hubby not ML.