Review Detail of GreedAF in Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)

Story in and on it self is good overall but there are things that I personally don't want to see, and I'm sure there are other like me too Firstly it's about his talent, it feels like you're nerfing him in a way that makes it not so obvious hy lowering his speed in cultivation, his spirit and such then go to balance it with techniques or heavenly flames, another problem comes with heavenly flames and that is it gives you the image of ultimate solution to all his no talent issues, and that just feels forced. I don't mean to offend you but to me it seems you just don't know how to scale his growth as to not make it tasteless OP but in doing so you're adding meaningless struggles. Secondly, it's his emotional state, he knows he love girl "A" but then he is scared to confess, which is understandable but the problem comes when it feels, and sometimes even shows, he knows it's two way feeling yet he doesn't act upon it. and if you're reason is because he has feelings for girl "B" that he can't come clean to it, that is a question in it self. relationship doesn't work on assuming but in action. Thirdly is some small grammar and dictations that could be easily solved. Overall I'd say you're book has potential but needs fine tuning.